Attendance is documentary poetry by Rocío Carlos and Rachel McLeod Kaminer, who are collaborating on a book length manuscript for the duration of one year.
As we stand in relation to plants and animals—and one another—we are not exempt, but alive as creatures in and of the world. Taking attendance, and attending, alters* our writing, bodies; places—city, land, wilderness; times—past, present, future…
*fucks up / fucks with / plant sex
A mirage is either a swimming pool or a march for workers’ rights. You come when called; your mother and father send signals of smoke and you come.
A Junco = Palo Verde, says your father. He says that when it’s full of yellow blooms the tree hums with bees. What are bees but daughters. You wish you were that tree.
The fields: not alfalfa but forage. What is the difference? The low wheat. Your father brags that on the other side their wheat would be tall and ready. As if the field still belonged to him a little. As if he owned anything at all.
The road narrows, the white peaks of the All American canal. Alamos everywhere, Juncos. You sleep in the adobe rooms your father built when he was a boy.
You instruct the room to map the body, to transpose the body onto the city. You make a map of a body that suffers cold, that burns with desire. Dendrites rise from your arms for touching. There is no touching. The field of care that is your arms. Your teeth chatter. You unfurrow your brow. You always look angry. This is what they say, anyway. The sharp points in your back shudder with cold. The navel contracts. You take inventory of your injuries and scars. There is not enough death anywhere to kill you.
What you remember: hunger.
The thing about the body is dressing it. White, as in an injury. Eyelet, lace. You are happy to be veiled, to take the body into the mouth. You are eight years old.
Where in the body is that memory?
What is it they say? Kill adjectives? Or adjectives kill? Either way, something dies.
A namesake sings about garlands, a lifeboat, a port. A singer who is not the namesake conjures a familiar voice and sings about hard love and dead mothers. A twinge when your name is called, a name that floated over the sea before you ever lived. The song La Guirnalda, the summer days in Cudahy not drowning. Your mother’s friend looking at you like she knows you and that your life will be difficult. She has only ever been kind.
Sometimes you and your mother laugh together. Sometimes she calls you the names of her sisters.
At the concert she touches your knee and says esta tu la cantas bonito.
It is likely that I was conceived on the sea if not by it.
(what day / no day)
All the gray days. The aloe a hydra, or those digital images of hurricanes named after women.
You get on your knees in the wilderness. You pull weeds and turn soil. Tabula raza/ when is there such a thing. Everything has consequences. Everything.
All of a sudden: Pilar Ternera. The refuge, un inframundo de carne.
A Plant nursery. Water floods the mouth. What was it the puritans used to say? Ornament is the devil. (garlands).
petunias / cosmos / dianthus
Petunias: related to tobacco and deadly nightshade. The datura and her trumpets signal dreaming and death.
Cosmos: from scrub and meadow. Leaves like bronchioles. Angelita’s garden when she still had one. Remember her attendance. The palm that fell, the calendula, her citrus grove.
Dianthus: glaucous / spicy: what hybrids do. Tiny kites.
The mind wishes for the proper emoji.
On Slauson is the fair, loud with banda de viento. On 60th street the palms and the willow sway with calm, the rosebushes shudder with the spring. The Virgin’s procession traps you and you sing soul of my soul/how lovely you are. People come out of their homes and say her name as she passes. Someone hands you a yellow balloon. The wonder of the swarm / the terror of the swarm. You film with your cellphone. You finish the rosary. Your grip loosens on the string. You open your hand. You hear your mother call your name.
4 May (Griffith Park) Ah but that raven playing against the wind. At the top of the park hill, where the wind—strong and steady everywhere all day—is channeling up the side and pillowing over the cut of the hill. Dip-diving throat first, then in a quick twist flip onto its shoulders, still diving and surfing, then back to front ways then back to back wings. I didn’t know it could be like that. I knew it played in the winds but not like that. It’s worse than stabbing giddiness this time. It’s WANT from under my chest cavity, a clench, a spurt, a drag of sensation down the inside of my back.
16 May And: [Redacted]
Also: How thinking the writing much differs from a hand writing. Much as thinking the prayer is another thing besides praying it—saying it rather than composing it—utterance
19 May—21 May. Orlando. GP and K.
One time, and I’ll never forget this,
That’s all right it’s just a plain old lake.
And the house that you’re looking straight at is where Bull Jones built—
And Alli smoked like a stack.
Falling down drunk—
Lake Virginia where your mother swam across the lake—Fleet Peeples was the swimming teacher, he taught everyone in Orlando how to swim.
I was three—I don’t remember.
M went, took lessons, but he never did swim across the lake—Kingsley was always independent—
That was a mistake.
Yes it was.
I think the hospital’s up further.
We had a time finding it but somehow we did.
Because it was Larry and Charles were born, and then David.
No I was I’m older than David.
There’s the Albertson Public Library. That’s where I found out John F Kennedy, the president was assassinated.
And Betty Jane Mann went to St. Luke’s, but I was not of the in-crowd.
No you’re thinking of Andy and Kitty, I mean Andy and Maud.
I lived with Grady, and then she got married, and took the car. And then I lived with Jackie. All the parents in town thought we were really racy.
And that monkey puzzle tree is still there.
That was Hilbert and Viola’s house.
And we had all those citrus trees, they’re all gone now. But I remember one year we sold all our oranges for $70. To a packing house.
done with bones
done with cracking out marrow
done with skin
done with sucking blood to surface
coming to muscle
coming to tendon, ligament, flesh muscle and teeth in it
back teeth, cleated molars
biting up into and down into
sinking one’s teeth into
and keeping them there
relaxing the jaw and easing the pressure
leaving them gentle in their own marks
wishing almost to lose the teeth,
again have hard smooth ridges,
gum the muscle,
to teeth on you
Bees and (4)
Camellia in her garden
(Two houses east and it would have been paved under I-4)
She had all kinds, they both say,
but this is my grandfather’s mother.
Variegated, red, pink—
more colors, more than one,
The one left is white.
Account to me the smell.
Whipped butter and sugar
over green broken plant stalk
Sweet and pungent, K says.
It perfumes the car
an invading aggression
an infiltration that hits high and middle in the sinuses
recirculating in the cavity right on top of the front teeth
under and flanking the nose.
On the osprey days it’s swimming, delight in the water right at the break. Atlantic Gulf Stream May temperature—warm enough to forget—sand and waves gentle at the moment. The osprey up and down the shoreline, north out of sight, then south out of sight, and back, and back.
And the Spirit of God was hovering over the waters.
Bruises appear where there has been cataclysm
blight / bloom
flood / drought
the landscape marks itself
to remember the blush of pleasure
of small suffering
a swirling hurricane
blood rises to the surface to say
here was the hand of God
writing a psalm
both giving and taking away.
My Other Country
A desert east from here, south from south
what is a border but a line in the sand
my other country / flayed god of spring
(what to do about my wilderness)
a grove during the enchanted hour:
In May you faced the cotton field and pulled hot oranges from hot branches. The haruspex commanded it, your hands burning with flesh, pith. The bitter smell in your hair, smeared on your bare thighs. You believed you were asleep, dreaming of eating oranges, the heat was so intense.
The workers cutting azahares/ the wild oils loosed
the wild language of my name.
My mother wore azahares in her hair
when she was a bride, as brides do.
In my other country – that body, a desert, a place of longing
the haruspex compels = winter is delayed, the spring approaches early
a compass, broken (what witches’ hammer)
points west and north
by cartographer’s incision
and home is a body
a country is a body
a body of course is a map
a map of course is a poem.
ABOUT THE AUTHOR
Rachel McLeod Kaminer has been thinking when do the notes for the work become the work for a while now, and Grimes’ "Be a Body" is on repeat in her head; her book As in the Dark, Descend (Writ Large Press) comes out 6/30/2016. Of plant attendance, Rocío Carlos says Literally What I Do Is I Go Outside And Make Sure They’re All Alive. She keeps an instagram of the things that live. See her familiar Scout demand attendance of the wilderness; see her be the wilderness.
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